REarVIEW

A3: Charcoal and wash on Paper

OK time to review – hence the title. I’ve broken through the resistance to describing values, which is important because values are vital to the impact of an image.

Having made this leap it’s clear I need a lot more pratice in this area as these new tonal drawings have an overall mid to light grey value making them rather bland. I’ve heard it said that the work is all in the midtones, but I can definitely get more punchy with the darks.

I could also improve the way I combine line with tone and create more lost edges (where one form blurs into another). There are one or two in this drawing but they are mainly happening in the background…and too often a contour line is interrupting an otherwise nice blend : (

So…do less outlining…improve edge variation…and punch up those darks! And maybe also darken the midtones enough to leave one or two clear highlights…

Oh yes…and remember to SQUINT!

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